Analysation of a students work: Her context is rich and dense, and she uses several words to describe the perfume. She not only describes what she would do in her career, but also in her social life, including her hobbies. Also, she involves the people she likes to be surrounded by. Concerning the visuals, she describes them with a slight story, and the emotions it is capable of causing.
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